Adjust the drama plot, enhance the work of Feng Yuping (Vice Chairman of the Chinese Player Association, First Level Actor): As the Huangmei Opera of the Modern Theme, "Deng Jiaxian" artistic achievements can be used. Huangmei opera "Deng Jiaxian" singing chamber, music is beautiful, let the audience feel the charm of Huangmei Opera, and then feel the nostalgia and love: the love between husband and wife, the love between mother and child, and the love of the nation and the country. But in the setting of individual plots, it also needs to be adjusted to make the works themselves more tension.
The play of the mother’s diseased news, it is recommended to receive the Guo Shenjun to the telegraph to change into the Telegraph. So, Deng Jiaxian will be aware of the consciousness after receiving the news, will be more touched, will also have more drama. tension.
In addition, Deng Jiaxian is not enough to use life to protect the plot of scientific data, flow in the form, the plot as the core of this drama, requires grinding on several emotions.
Shaping the three-dimensional image of Deng Jiaxiang, carry forward the traditional Qin Huasheng of the art (Missionary Memorial Memorial Hall): Huangmei Opera "Deng Jiao Xian" overall reached a certain height, especially in the field of drama stage, this work is made. Poor try and explore.
How does art creation enters the spiritual level of the characters, find someone to pursue, family life is different from others, which requires creators to continue to consider and explore.
Next, it is recommended to continue to dig deeply in the personal image of Deng Jiaxian, including his personal pursuit, family life, etc., highlighting the true and good beauty of art.
First of all, the characters of Deng Jiaxiang are in touch with the objectivity, authenticity, such as Deng Jiaxiang’s old age has not been to Yuanmingyuan, but in this drama. In addition, when shaping Deng Jiaxun, abandoning the expression of individual emotions, this is actually harm to the characters, such as the relationship between Deng Jiao and mother, it is recommended to add some content. Adjust the drama to meet the expectations of young audiences (Professor, Shanghai Drama Academy, Professor, First Level): This drama is very powerful, but the subsequent paragraph is inadequate, especially the desert, the drama, need to strengthen . In terms of plot setting, the play of Yuanmingyuan is better before Deng Jiao first departure. I suggest to delete the role of the brothers and sisters, these two characters have not played the role of plot development; the character is shaped, and the uniqueness of Deng Jiaxian behavior should be highlighted, so that the image is more full; and since the music is used to use the red flag and other melody It is necessary to integrate the music into the singing chamber of the Huangmei drama; The moment, more time.
Resend to the script, create a boutique modern drama Wang Hui (Shanxi Culture and Tourism Opera Creation Office Director, First Level Plan ": Huangmei Opera" Desperate "with a unique perspective, distinctive rhythm, shaped a legendary figure, realizing the subject Legendary and artistic depth combination. Below, I want to give the repertoires to give a few suggestions: First, the plot of the sacrifice of Guo Yonghui’s sacrifice is naturally delicate; the second is that the emotional expression of the grand scene has some blood and conceptualization, and it should be integrated into the artistic emotion; The play of Deng Jiaxian team is difficult to calculate, I hope to add some details and true stories; four is to deal with the performance of Deng Jiaxian in the protagonist, can relax some, plus some balances, tighten, and humorous lines; five is suggestion The first play was treated: After a family had dinner, Deng Jiaxian said the wife’s mobilization, and the heart is not concerned about the appearance of the appearance of the appearance, making his wife a psychological wave. This is more vicissible than the whole family reunion after 28 years.
Wash the drama plot, returning to life essence He Hongxing (Xi’an Qin Chaoshi Co., Ltd. Art Director, First Level Director): Huangmei Opera "Deng Jiaxian" has been very good in the rhythm, especially the anti-chemical run.
According to this paragraph standard, I think it can still be better in the plot.
First of all, the arrangement of the Jeep movement can be opened, and the pause can be added, so that the scene is more flexible; second, in the first play, the drama to the northwest is too slow, lack of drama conflicts, should be discre well the conflict; Third, putting the sixth play to the first game, let Deng Jiao carried from the bed to the computer, calculation, fighting the same time, this plot setting will be more touching; fourth, in the mother of the mother In the middle, we must better express the two difficulties choices of Deng Jiaxiang and make the country’s dilemma and the mother’s filial piety. This entanglement will be more conceived; fifth, put the fire burning Yuanmingyuan on the influence of Deng Jiaxiang, will make Deng Jiaxian The behavior is more convincing and driving.
In addition, music, it is recommended to reduce the sound of the small number, otherwise it will affect the atmosphere of the whole drama. The actor shaped and then puts the skills, and the music is re-treated Dong Hong (Zhangjiagang City Xi Draday Art Center Director, First Level Actor): "Deng Jiaxian" is not telling the personal deeds of Deng Jiaxian, but telling the story of China’s older generation. This drama has changed many times, but there are still some problems.
The main reason I think is not on the script, may be on the starring. The image of Deng Jiaxiang has begun from the age of 26, and the actor’s vision should be expressed, and whether the old Deng Jiaxian needs an actor to play, I think it may be bold. In addition, there is a need to adjust the proportion of related plots in the script, try to set key plots, character relationship with the main role.
Finally, the music in the play is very modern, but there is still a trace in the connection of the atmosphere music and the music music, I hope to have better improvements.